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02-23-2006, 11:28 PM
A thread about a training fight between two sand genins, Mizachi and Kenji.
Fresh Starts, A Genin Showdown (http://www.narutorp.net/showthread.php?p=122433#post122433)
Location - Hidden Sand
Toshiashi Mizachi (http://www.narutorp.net/showthread.php?t=8932) - Kapeesh
Isamashii Kenji (http://www.narutorp.net/showthread.php?t=9096) - resound_
Thats all I need to include right?
02-24-2006, 01:34 PM
You should probably include other useful information like which Country/Village, a short descriptive summary and the like.
Eh, but in the future right?
I will take this one.
A quick read, here are your scores. . .
Technical Quality: 6/10 for resound_ and 5/10 for Kapeesh. I'd recommend you read through your posts after you type them up. Also I'd suggest you send it through a spell and grammar check.
Post Quantity/Length: Both of you had very short post lengths. This wouldn't have been as bad if your thread was longer, as is though 5/10 for both of you. I'd encourage you to either make your next thread longer (more posts per person) if you are going to have shorter posts, or make your posts longer.
Combat/Roleplaying resound_ RPed his character a little better but Kapeesh won the fight, so you both get 6/10. Reason is, your tactics mainly consisted of throwing things at each other. I'd didn't see any real indepth strategy.
Activity: Excellent activity for both of you. You both get 10/10 for this. If I could I would rate you higher, but I can't so I shan't.
Kapeesh 26/40. Earns you 2 points
resound_ 27/40. Earns you 2 points.
Post and let me know what you want to spend them on.
02-24-2006, 02:13 PM
Thanks for the ratings, I hope I will get better ones next time. And I dont mind getting more than 10 in activity :)
I want to spend 1 point in learning Suna Bunshin no Jutsu, its a stage one in sand offensive list and the second point goes to tactics.
Thanks for rating the thread, Tigresama.
I hope that our next thread will be a more enjoyable read (that is, if you're the one who rates it) :)
As for the points, I'd like to put both points into Kenji's statistics. One into Willpower, and the other into Tactics, thanks.
02-26-2006, 04:59 PM
Edited in the stat/jutsu additions, so you don't have to worry about it, Tigre.
Edited by Tigresama
Thanks, you rock.
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