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Old 08-26-2017, 02:13 AM   #10
Masked_One
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The bio format is interesting, I'll agree with Junge there. It reads like a writing example as opposed to a biography, but still manages to convey some of his motivations/backstory.

Do me a favor though; I would like a reference to Jin's graduation duel somewhere in the bio. It's a pretty big deal to have to fight someone to preserve your career at age 12 or so. Also, promotion to chuunin. What did he do? From the bio it sounds like he just ran his own personal lab prior to the war; what would cause his superiors to promote him based on that? Elaborate on those details for me and I'll be back.
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