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Old 12-09-2008, 12:53 AM   #1
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Name: Blood Test
Stage: 1
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Requirements: Must be Rokujou Miharu

Description: This is a rather simple genjutsu to execute. All you have to do is make three handseals, and if the victim sees the last one, the technique is triggered. This illusion makes the victim see blood, instead of mucus, every time he/she spits. Now, it may not seem like anything serious but when used in conjunction with the right techniques and in the right way, you can get some pretty awesome results. For example, stack this with the Annoying Cough technique, and your victim will be coughing up “blood” in no time.
Duration: 1,3,6

Name: Hidden Face
Stage: 2
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Requirements: Must be Rokujou Miharu

Description: Yet another simple technique, but it is effective. Making the few handseals needed, the user will have to make some type of reference to the ground, example being “Look at the ground!” If the victim hears it, the genjutsu is triggered. When the victim looks down, the ground rises up in the shape of a face. The face can be of anything, but in Miharu’s case, it’s usually a skull. The eyes light up as if it has come to life, and the mouth opens wide in an attempt to swallow the victim. Only used as a distraction, or a pretty good prank, this technique forces the victim to make a very quick decision as they try not to get swallowed, which may leave an opening in their defense. This technique only for a quick moment, making it a good surprise tactic. This technique does no real damage, it's more of a scare tactic.
Duration: 1/1/1

Name: Dark Guardian
Stage: 2
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After making a few handseals, Miharu has to make eye contact with the victim in order to trigger the genjutsu. Once triggered, the victim will see a dark figure appear behind Miharu. That thing definitely wasn't there a econd ago. The figure gives off an energy thta is evil and disgusting. It seems like you're looking at Death himelf. The being spreads its wings and wraps around Miharu, as if to protect him. It even speaks, saying "Stay away". This technique gives the victim a sense of uneasiness, as they might not want to get close to that thing hovering around Miharu. It only lasts for one post and is only used to instill fear in the victim.

Name: Eternal Agony
Stage: 6
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Description: This is the type of genjutsu that you would be very afraid of and is only used by the extra sinister type. Mostly used in the instances of interrogation or if you’re busy torturing someone, this can be used on the field just as well. After making a string of handseals, the victim must hear the user say the word “agony” in order for the technique to be triggered. Once triggered, the victim’s mind enters into a world of darkness. Suddenly, a ground below opens up and from it raises a figure. The very sight of this beast of hell will send unsettling chills down your spine. The victim’s “body” is strung up, as if being held by various ropes and wires. They can’t move a muscle, yet all they can do is watch as the beast draws nearer. A second later, the seals that once withheld the monster’s movements are broken. Four arms, the two large ones and the two around its neck, extend outward toward the victim. To be touched by such a creature would bring unimaginable pain to its victim. (The events that take place is left up to the victim’s owner) This torture continues throughout the entire duration. Afterward, the victim sees a flash of light, and he/she wakes up as if it was all a nightmare…a very real and gruesome nightmare…

Name: Meet the Guardian
Stage: 7
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Description: Since you got a chance to see the Dark Guardian, it is only fitting that you know see its true form and hear its name. And when you do hear the name Akashita, the genjutsu is triggered. The Dark Figure returns, but this time, its alittle different. You see on the following post, bones began to appear. Muscles and tendons attach and the shadowy wings take on color. The Demon God has finally been released onto our plane of existence, and you get to meet him personally…what an honor, right? Well, if the sight of this guy…er, being (whatever you wanna call it) doesn’t scare you enough (mind you he’s as big as the Boss summons), then you’ll be crapping your pants when his soul stealers start flying around. You see if, and when, these demons pass through any part of your body, they give you an illusionary pain similar to having your bones ripped out…when you’re still alive…yeah, it hurts. Lucifer, however, sits upright on his throne of corpses and death that is until he pulls his diamond blade from his chest. When that happens, don’t try to run, because you won’t get far enough. He will proceed to raise his sword, which keeps growing in length, until he brings it down on you. In a flash, you wake up in a daze, your mind feeling fatigued and drained from everything you just witnessed.

Name: Corpse Wall
Stage: 4
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Decsription: Have you ever seen the movie 300? You know, when they built that wall and used dead bodies as the mortar? Now that you have that in your mind, think about all the defensive wall techniques employed by the various villages. Now, mix those two together. When the victim, or victims, attacks Miharu, he makes the necessary handseals and says “Shigaiheki”. When the victim hears that, the genjutsu is triggered. From there, the victim sees bodies spew from Miharu’s mouth and come together to form a tightly packed wall in front of him. The wall “blocks” the oncoming attack and leaves the victim staring at it. But something is weird. The victim looks closer and begins to recognize some of the corpses, whether they are loved ones, teammates, or just regular people they have crossed paths with. Of course, this technique does not protect Miharu in any way. If he cannot dodge the attack, he will be hit, the victim just won’t know since they will be caught in the illusion by that time.
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Old 12-09-2008, 02:53 AM   #2
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Stage 1 and 3 suggested. The trigger for the second would be looking at the ground, wouldn't it? Also, on the first, you have to realize you have to stack genjutsu to do, so make sure to re-read over the genjutsu stacking rules. Nice, balanced techniques.

Also mention that the skull-bite doesn't do any illusory damage, or actually swallow them.
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Old 12-09-2008, 06:22 PM   #3
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I added the stages to both techniques and added the requested info to the Hidden Face technique. I as shooting for the trigger to be sound for the second one but sight works just fine.
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Old 12-09-2008, 09:36 PM   #4
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Half approved. Actually pretty interesting, imo.
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Old 12-09-2008, 11:20 PM   #5
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Half Approval.
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Old 12-16-2008, 11:53 PM   #6
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Bump time!
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Old 12-17-2008, 12:00 AM   #7
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Actually, would I be a terrible person if I re-suggested the skull one be a stage 2? I mean, yes it's a little stronger than a regular stage 2, but not by much. And I assume these are for a genin.

[Halfproved] at One and Three/Two (whichever is the final).
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Old 12-17-2008, 01:28 PM   #8
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Well, I just added another technique so I need that to be rated as well.
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Old 12-17-2008, 05:00 PM   #9
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Dark Guardian - Do you mean it's min/base/max post are all at 1 or just its base/max?

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Old 12-17-2008, 06:51 PM   #10
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Well just like the hidden face technique i only want the dark guardian technique to last for the victims next post so it will play as a distraction.
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