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Old 07-01-2008, 09:45 PM   #1
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Default [Mist Jounin] Hitotsuyanagi Maho



It hurts more when you pull out a knife
then when you stab it, did you know that?
A flower doesn't even know how pretty it is, ever in its life.
Isn't that sad.

Name: Hitotsuyanagi Maho
Age: 27
Sex: Female
Height: 5'7
Theme Song: Girls be Ambitious - Miyavi

Character Type: Shinobi

Country/Village: Water Country - Hidden Village of Mist
Rank: Jounin
Division: [Navy of Mist] Sailor

Physical Description: Red. Red hair. Red eyes. Red. That is the initial thought to her appearance. It is truly the only identifying marker of the woman and makes it easy to find her in a crowd because of these traits. Yet the scarlet hues gift her a unique vibrancy. She becomes beautiful because of them. People tend to ignore the discolored scars trailing her flesh and even the swollen wounds waiting to transform into more scars. However one of her more traumatic ones is situated on her back, right beside a flower tattoo. There is another located on her right forearm, a parting gift from her nukenin brother. The flesh has healed enough to appear as if it was foreign skin etched upon her own.

Maho was once very aware of her beauty however she has currently turned to ignoring it. Her physique is hard to see beneath her clothing but no one assumes she is a slim woman. Although her body is lithe, it is strong. Years of swordsmanship have crafted her arms to be firm with muscle. Yet she possesses a remarkable, unique grace that undoubtedly label her as a shinobi.

Clothing: Maho has retired her usual mission apparel for something more career and age appropriate. Her previous attire was admittedly a bit revealing and provocative thus the woman has settled for something simply less. An off-white, almost constantly stained with either blood or dirt jacket reaches to her knees and covers to her neck. A dark scarf is wrapped over her jacket, around her neck. The shirts beneath the jacket often changes; it can vary between a red sweater and a dark shirt. A black belt hangs around her waist, her jian hangs on her back. Tight, but mobile and breathable pants guard her legs against harsh Kirigakure winds. She is certainly not the naked, little ninja she used to be.


Personality: Ambitious. Passionate. Dangerous. These words describe Hitotsuyanagi Maho rather well. She is not a genius tactician or perfect strategist, but Maho has been a shinobi for many years and thinks as one. She will risk herself for her village, she is absolutely dedicated to molding a better Kirigakure. It makes her both reckless and cautious. She will plunge head first into danger if it will assure the safety of her village, but she will do so very carefully. She is a warrior. Maho will bring upon a rainfall of blood if it was her mission.

The woman often speaks with a sarcastic tone. She is afraid of sincerity, terrified that her feelings will hinder her. So she hides them as best she can while still attempting to understand them. Somewhat emotionally unstable, Maho is struggling to find the balance between human being and shinobi.

Nindo: "Be stronger."
Formerly: "I might be a woman, but I got balls."

Primary Archetype: Taijutsu Specialist
Special: When taken as Primary Archetype, the character receives Stage One of a taijutsu style for free, provided the appropriate stat requirements are met.
Primary: Physical
Secondary: Mental
Tertiary: Chakra
Stat Merit: +1 to Strength, +1 to Speed, +1 to Stamina
Stat Flaw: -2 to Reserves, -1 to Power
Description: A simple type of shinobi, those who hone this Archetype lack in the abilities of ninjutsu and genjutsu, and possibly even chakra control, but they balance it out with strength. They spend their lives practicing a specified form of martial art and try and perfect it. They are always close-range fighter's that focus on strength and speed over intelligence and chakra control.

Secondary Archetype; Blade Dancer
Special: When taken as Primary Archetype, the character can temporarily gains access to his trained sword style’s next stage “benefits”. This only includes stage bonuses and regular techniques. This special only lasts for one post.
Primary: Physical
Secondary: Own Choice
Tertiary: Own Choice
Stat Merit: +1 to Strength, +1 to Speed, +1 to Tactics
Stat Flaw: -1 to Willpower, -1 to Reserves, -1 to Power
Description: These are taijutsu specialists who master techniques of the sword. They practice a style that bases are the sword and use only that for their main means of power. Unless they are fighting other Blade Dancer's, they cannot be beaten in terms of skill with a sword. Unlike most weapon specialists, Blade Dancer's usually have a lot of stamina to be able to fight up close.

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Statistics

Taijutsu Specialist
Blade Dancer
Freebie

Physical [Primary]

Strength: 1+1+1+23+8[thread]= 34 [+ 21 CnK] = 51
Speed: 1+1+1+18+3[thread]= 24 [+ 19 CnK] = 41
Stamina: 1+1+1+19+4[thread]= 26 [+ 8 CnK] = 34

Mental [Secondary]

Intelligence: 1+17= 18
Tactics: 1+17 +2[thread]= 20
Willpower: 1-1+16 +7[thread]= 23

Chakra [Tertiary]

Power: 1-1-1+13 + 2[thread] = 14
Control: 1+13= 14
Reserves: 1-2-1+14= 12

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Jutsus and Techniques:

Chigatana no Kenbu
[TaiSpecial/F1-F4/TP] Stage Six
Stat Requirements: Strength 29, Stamina 24, Speed 22, Willpower 19, Tactics 17
Bonuses: +21 Strength +19 Speed +8 Stamina
Special Techniques
[F5] Sakki no Kanji (Feeling of Bloodlust) Level 1
[F6] Sakki no Kanji (Feeling of Bloodlust) Level 2
[TP] Attou Sakki (Overwhelming Bloodthirst)

Global Ninjutsu
Stage One
[F7] Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
Requirements: Intelligence 3, Reserves 3
[F8] Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Requirements: Power 3, Willpower 2
Stage Two
[F9] Kyou Masukingu No Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)
Requirements: Intelligence 6, Tactics 5, Control 5
[F10] Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique)/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique)
Requirements: Power 6, Control 6, Intelligence 4
Stage Three
[F11] Suimen Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Water Walking)
Requirements: Power 10, Control 10, Willpower 8
[GMAP] Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu No Jutsu (Hidden Explosion Technique)
Requirements: Power 8, Control 8, Reserves 6
[GMAP] Chakra Tsuitou no Jutsu (Chakra Hunting Technique)
Requirements: Power 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7
Stage Four
[F12] Shunshin no Jutsu (Instantaneous Body Technique)
Requirements: Intelligence 12, Tactics 11, Willpower 10, Power 12

Mist Genjutsu
Stage One
[TP] Doro Bunshin no Jutsu (Mud Clone Skill)
Requirements: Reserves 3, Tactics 3
Stage Two
[TP] Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Requirements: Reserves 5, Control 4, Power 4
Stage Three
[F13] Botabota (Drip Drip)
Requirements: Reserves 9, Control 9, Intelligence 7

Chase the Devil
[F14-F16] Stage Three
Stat Requirements: 10 Willpower, 10 Tactics, 8 Speed
Bonuses: +9 Speed
Special Techniques
[F17] Blind the Devil
[F18] Tag the Devil

Steam Ninjutsu
Stage One
[TP] Jouki Soujuu (Steam Creation)
Requirements: Power 2, Intelligence 2
[GMAP] Suijouki Fukurami no Jutsu (Steam Puff Technique)
Requirements: Control 3, Tactics 2
Stage Two
[TP] Umihebi no Ibuki (Serpent’s Breath)
Requirements: Power 6, Control 6, Tactics 4

Inventory:
-Shuriken
Cost: 2

-Kunai
Cost: 2

-Breathing Apparatus
Cost: 2

-Smoke Bombs
Cost: 2

-Jian
Cost: 6

-Explosive Tags
Cost: 4

Weapon Points Remaining: 2

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Biography:















Other Info:
*Hopes one day she can find her sister and kill her father
*Fell in love only once
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[ Thread was lost, but I had some of her on my computer so finished her up and remade her, kinda ]

Thread Log:
13 Aug - Assassinate the Rogue Country - +1 GMAP - Hitoshizeru Bakuhatsu No Jutsu
03 Dec - [Team 17] Scavenger Hunting - +2 Strength, +1 Speed, Doro Bunshin no Jutsu
14 Apr - [Team 17] Don't Hate, Appreciate! - +1 Strength, +1 Stamina, Kirigakure no Jutsu - Genjutsu
27 Apr - The Bar - +1 Stamina, +2 Willpower
30 Jun - The Dare Game - +1 Willpower, +1 Strength, Stage 6 CnK, GMAP - Chakra Tsuitou
5 Nov - Mist Rewards - +2 Power, Attou Saki
13 Jan - The Space Between - +2 Tactics, +1 Willpower
3 Mar - House Call - +3 Willpower
18 Aug - Intercept the Pirates +4 Strength
12 Sep - Rolling in the Deep +2 Stamina, Steam Creation, Steam Puff
7 July - Moth's Wings - +2 Speed, Umihebi no Ibuki
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Old 07-01-2008, 10:25 PM   #2
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Quote:
Reserves: 1-2-1+13= 12
Should be 11.

Edit: Also, you took one to many jutsus, I count 19.
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Old 07-01-2008, 10:28 PM   #3
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And 11 it is!

EDIT: Lies, Tai specialist gives you first stage of a Taijutsu free.
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Old 07-01-2008, 11:06 PM   #4
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Alright, I'm weirded out by your math. You didn't take the stat merit for Blade Dancer, and you only used 39 points for your tertiary statblock.

Nice nindo, by the way.
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Well no more weirdness now. Edited and stuff.
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Old 07-02-2008, 06:39 PM   #6
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The bio is much better now, especially the last part. It makes a lot more sense now then it did before.

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Out of curiosity, but why exactly did the psychologist commit suicide?

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Welcome to Mist, yeah.

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Also halfd. Math failure.
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Half'd. : D
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Well, since the bio was in first person, I couldn't write why he killed himself since Maho couldn't read minds or anything ;P

So the story was that he fell in love with her, but she reminded him of his wife and truth was that his wife had been so strong and he had been to weak for her etc etc. Fell in to a depression and leaving Maho was like leaving his wife blah blah blah. Couldn't take it so he went emo and killed himself. ;P *nod*

Also added Explosive Notes, btw. I decided I have a need for them.
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