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Old 12-02-2008, 10:39 PM   #1
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Name: Hanabachi Piripiri (Bumblebee Sting)
Stage: Two
Replacing: Medical Jutsu ; Sansokyoukyuu (Oxygen Supply)
Requirements: Are you Tsubasa Akina?! Oh, and Intelligence 5, Willpower 4, Tactics 4
Description: The user begins to concentrate all their chakra in to a fist, which takes up a single post, in the next post they punch their opponent. When the chakra is transmitted from one body to the other, the area in which the opponent was punched begins to swell up and turn red. If an arm was punched, then that whole arm swells up as if a giant bee stung them. This lasts for two posts and only affects external organs such as the skin and muscles.

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Name: Stomach Twister
Stage: Three
Replacing: --- [Special Technique in RSWG]
Requirements: Power 7, Reserves 7, Control 6
Description: Punches are punches, they can hurt when given the extra boost, but not the extra extra boost. And with the extra extra boost, they hurt more. Charging in front of the target, Tsukio is going to get ready to punch them. But wait, it's not just a regular punch, it's a way badass punch. The moment her fist collides with the opponent's stomach (and the jutsu is always aimed at the stomach) she twists her wrist, twisting the user's insides with the help of chakra. But this only lasts a second so it is based on precision and if Tsukio doesn't do it accurately, then it doesn't work out.

After the punch, the opponent is knocked back a few feet, they begin to experience harsh stomach cramps. This does no damage on their insides, but may leave a bruise on their stomachs.

Name: Cry Baby [Genjutsu]
Stage: Two
Description: During fights, Hana prefers to stay back and get her opponent to runaway. This is probably one of her favorite tactics to get that to happen. After completing a few handseals, she throws her ugly doll in front of her opponent. The moment the enemy interlocks eyes with the green plush, it begins to grow bigger in size and reaches to about 20 feet. That's not the horrible part though, it actually comes to life and begins to cry - as if it were a child. The crying is extremely loud and is hard to ignore, thus it is difficult to concentrate.

Name: Funny Ugly [Genjutsu]
Stage: One
Description: Hana isn't always very nice so she would like to scare her opponent or make them feel sad. After preparing for the jutsu, she calls out to the opponent, insulting them - most of the time the way they look. After her enemy hears this, they hallucinate that there are many ugly dolls around them. They hear laughter from the toys, echoing through their eardrums. Another side to this is that each doll has milk dripping from their mouths and their eyes glowing red, adding some horror to the genjutsu.

Name: Safety Doll! [Ninjutsu]
Stage: Three
Description: Hana worries a lot that she can't protect herself so she has her ugly doll do it for her. After performing some handseals, she throws the ugly doll in front of her and he grows to roughly 20 feet. He stands there, as if he was a giant guardian in front of her and keeps his arms spread out. The plush is coated in chakra and is able to block stage two ninjutsu and lower. Other than being a defense, there is no use for this technique.

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Archetypes: Myrmidon – Daredevil
Combo Special: Once per thread, when the Maniac feels they are in grave danger, they can throw themselves into a defensive state that blocks all incoming damage and instead reflects it on the opponent. They can only block Stage Four taijutsu or lower.
Description: Maniacs are true to their name. They’re foolish and unpredictable, leading their opponents into traps that could hurt them just as much. However they listen to their hearts even if it may seem a little crazy. But that’s what they are so what’s the point in fighting it? They are determined and enter fights with a strong hand, unafraid of the danger that may come. They're prepared to hit just as hard.
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Old 12-02-2008, 10:44 PM   #2
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Swaps can't have Staging. Give the tech a definite duration.
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Old 12-02-2008, 10:46 PM   #3
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Oh, oh, I didn't know. But I fixed it so yay! Also added a little side note (last sentence). :P
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So the tech requires a post of charging, has one post duration and can be used twice per thread? It's weak enough for a Rating of Stage 4.
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Old 12-02-2008, 11:04 PM   #5
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Is it there any possible way that I can make it weak enough for stage three? >.>
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Old 12-02-2008, 11:30 PM   #6
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Could just do something else with electrical charge. Like, if instead of the reversal properties, you made one half of the body go numb/limp or something like that. But as is, you aren't going to get a stage five jutsu two stages lower because of a change in duration/usage.
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Old 12-02-2008, 11:32 PM   #7
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Oh... I see. Just move in to unfinished for a bit and it'll be back soon. Gotta think over it just a little. >3<
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Maybe just causing a post of nerve disturbance to a limb instead of whole body? I can see that as Stage 3.
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Alright edited it all and actually made two jutsu and hopefully both are good enough for stage three or lower. In to jutsu registry, and go! Please move this, thanks<3
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Old 12-06-2008, 12:58 AM   #10
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I'm thinking stage 2 since it's a minor, temporary hindrance for the first tech and stage three for the second one.
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