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Old 05-14-2009, 06:07 PM   #1
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After dodging a number of unpleasant traps and detaining a missing-nin, Konoha's Team Four moves to recruit a legendary blacksmith who has lived the life of a hermit on the mountain for many years. However, even as the Konohagakure shinobi move to force him out of retirement, a number of Shinobi from Hidden Sand move in, and the mission grows ever more complicated. More dangerous.

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Sanada Seijirou - Slav
Nara Hitomi - Will of Fire
Saitsuki Yori - Kaen
Saitsuki Toosu - Oakapea

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Teshigahara Kojuro - Aces65
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Old 05-30-2009, 01:40 PM   #2
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Bumped once more.
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Old 06-01-2009, 12:50 PM   #3
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Claimed by me. It may take a little while, though.
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Old 06-09-2009, 10:57 AM   #4
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What can I really say about this? Seemed like vintage Team 4 dynamic, not that that's really a bad thing. As usual, Asshole-sensei is an asshole, Yori's a jellyfish trying not to be as jellyfish-y, Hitomi's just awesome and Toosu's a bitch (with Oak vanishing at some point during the thread). There's nothing to really point out in terms of flaws, since the four of you have good control over your language and your characters. The interaction with the Sand-nin was probably the highlight of the thread to me, since it showed a dynamic that hasn't been seen since the Chuunin Exams -- interaction with other people's characters.

Overall, the thread was as enjoyable as any other Team 4 thread that I've had the privilege to read.

Oak/Kaen/WoF - 2 points
Slav - 3 points

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Now on the Sand side.

Ace you performed as well as you usually do. I really got a feel for Koujuro and how he thought/felt during the course of this thread, which was cool given that I've been privy to three of your other characters. It must be hard dealing with those genin of his, lol. Your count obviously didn't get up to the required amount, but it was pretty amiable that you stepped in in order to give another thread some dynamic.

It's not much, but you can claim a point as well. Stats only, though. (Maybe Kaen will throw some GMAP your way.)
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Old 06-09-2009, 11:28 AM   #5
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Can't pick your teammates. (you can, but you can't, you know what I mean) Thanks, Juu.

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Old 06-09-2009, 05:28 PM   #6
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I'll take the Kadou-Ken stage two special, Kuuhaku Douryou Atemi, and one point to tactics. I'll do my own edits.
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Old 06-09-2009, 06:17 PM   #7
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Thanks, Juu <3

I'll be taking +1 Control and Stage 3 Nara tech: Kage Kichou (Shadow Screen). Editing myself.
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Both my points to willpower, please (and thank you!).
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Old 06-12-2009, 10:09 AM   #9
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I added 2 to Control and 1 to Intelligence.

Did my edits and Oak's.
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