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Old 03-05-2011, 09:39 AM   #1
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Demon Bunny Swarm
Stage: 2
Trigger: Target must see Masaaki remove his hat.
Description: Masaaki removes his hat and gives it light shake. A large stream of tiny white rabbits with glowing red eyes and fangs pour forth from the hat. They swarm the target nibbling and gnashing him with their teeth, causing minor illusionary pain. This genjutsu is mostly used for its fear factor -- a swarm of demon bunnies is just undeniably frightening.
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Spotlight
Stage: 2
Trigger: Target must hear Masaaki say, "Spotlight, please!"
Description: Upon hearing Masaaki utter the words, "Spotlight, please!" the light around the target in a 10 meter diameter seems to intensify as though a bright spotlight were shining down upon him. Simultaneously, everything outside the area of effect is cast in a dark shadow. While nowhere near pitch black, it becomes difficult to accurately perceive things outside circle. The genjutsu is immediately canceled if the target exits the area of effect. This genjutsu will only work if Masaaki is within the area of effect when it is cast. This genjutsu can only effect one target at a time.
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Dagger Fireworks
Stage: 2
Description: The user throws up to three daggers imbued with chakra. At a snap of the fingers the daggers explode into colorful fireworks. The strength of the explosion is on par with an exploding pouch and the light from the fireworks can blind those close enough to them for one post.

Dagger Swallowing
Stage: 1
Description: Akin to the art of sword swallowing, Masaaki swallows a chakra imbued dagger. He can fire the dagger from his mouth at anytime. The dagger can remained swallowed for up to three posts before it must be removed.
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Old 03-08-2011, 02:17 PM   #2
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Bunny Swarm: I don't see a need for the 1/1/1 specified duration. It can just take the duration of whatever stage it's in.

Spotlight: Same as Bunny Swarm.

Wheel of Death: You can't force the target to "believe" anything. You can create the illusion that they're strapped down (another issue I will comment on following this), but your jutsu cannot dictate that they will believe it's real.

The main problem with this is the binding aspect of it. The way it's set up, the illusion has them strapped down, which means in reality they're pretty much just...standing still. We once had an era of binding Genjutsu on Engi and....it really wasn't pretty.

Dagger Fireworks: s2
Dagger Swallowing: s1
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Old 03-08-2011, 04:35 PM   #3
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Removed Wheel of Death entirely, I figured the strapped down issue would prove problematic. Removed the durations from Bunny Swarm and Spotlight.
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Old 03-10-2011, 02:27 PM   #4
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Suggesting s2 for both of the Gen techs.
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Old 03-17-2011, 03:12 AM   #5
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half approved at res'
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Old 03-21-2011, 02:07 PM   #6
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I'll Half-Approve these at Res's ratings.
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Old 03-21-2011, 02:45 PM   #7
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Half-proved at Res's ratings
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Old 03-23-2011, 11:26 PM   #8
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Old 03-25-2011, 06:19 PM   #9
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And Gransy's half makes 3!
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