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Old 05-06-2014, 08:39 PM   #1
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Naga Remnants And Lightning Sparks.
The Jungle Lives!
Sengo, a man searching for Naga experiments, and Etsuko, a woman looking for secrets for Hidden Cloud Village, arrive on the Island of Spirits to find the place where their search should begin. The forest, however, holds many dangers. A Raptor Attacks.



And a Woman In White haunts their journey to the Ruins of Oojorougumokai.

Word Count: 7.733 K
Cayuga - 3.520 K
Kibe - 4.213 K

Note: I believe this applies for 1 GMAP each.
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Old 05-10-2014, 02:43 AM   #2
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Old 05-10-2014, 01:07 PM   #3
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This was a pretty interesting read. I'm not sure how to feel about Sengo's incessant need to see Etsuko's eyes but I guess it fits with the Naga theme.

Cayuga, there were a few words misspelled and some grammar issues, none of which detracted from the thread, but keep an eye out. Another thing to work on that I fall prey to myself is to repeat yourself in multiple posts.

Kiba, your writing was solid which I'm coming to find out is par for the course. You also maintained the pace of the thread nicely.

Cayuga, you get 3 points, one to be spent on a jutsu while Kiba also gets 3 for a great performance, one to be used on jutsu as well.
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Old 05-10-2014, 10:04 PM   #4
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Thanks Kana!

I'm going to spend two points on Magnetic Fist Stage Three, and a Third Point on Control.

I'll get my edits, and also hopefully Jami will stop by, and slap some GMAP on this sucka.

Edit: Jami told me to just claim the GMAP. I'm going to use it on a Mag Fist technique; Magnetic Levitation.
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Old 05-11-2014, 07:37 AM   #5
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Thanks for the Rating Kana

Can I please get
Blood Contagion
Requirements: Infliction II; 18 Control, 17 Reserves, 17 Power, 14 Tactics
http://www.narutorp.net/showthread.php?t=43526

1 in power and 1 in control

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Power 17, Reserves 16, Control 16, Willpower 15

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