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Old 03-19-2006, 06:02 PM   #1
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(As a note, I used all my points from Old Engi in here)

Name: Shinsei, Yomi
Age: 13
Sex: Female
Height: 5’ 0”

Character Type: Shinobi

Country/Village: Snow Country/ Hidden Snow Village
Rank: Genin
Division: N/A




Physical Description:
Yomi is short for her age, standing at only five feet tall. Due to this and her body shape, she can be considered cute, but certainly not attractive. Her body is slender and gracefully shaped; though because of this she looks as if she could snap like a twig because of even the faintest breeze. Her fingers are long and dainty, like those one might expect a piano player to have. Her face is nothing amazing. Her cream brown eyes show a perfect innocence, not tainted by killing or death, and even naiveté. Her hair is a light brown color, and extends down to her neck. Yomi’s most noticeable feature is her vanilla skin tone that radiates a sense of youth.

Clothing: Almost all of Yomi’s physical features are covered up by her clothing simply because it is so large. This is quite normal for the Snow Country though because of the obviously cold climate. Yomi’s family doesn’t mind spending whatever it takes to keep Yomi safe and protected from harm, and the climate is the first of the dangers she’ll face. Her outfit follows a general color scheme of whites, creams, blacks, and golds with a warm fur lining. Her warm overcoat and dress match perfectly, and the fabric they are designed from show that she comes from a rich heritage. It would be very easy to say Yomi’s clothing is overdone from the large bells which don’t actually ring, and the multiple bows on her dress. On the side of her small jacket is her family’s insignia, two wings jetting out from each other, and on the back of her jacket she also has a small one foot wing jutting from the shoulder blade.

Personality: Yomi is simply a sweet and naïve girl, whose upbringing has caused her to be sheltered to the real world. She has a strong determination, but she can become discouraged a bit easily. Her doll “Pretty Lady” has become almost like a safety blanket to her, and she is never seen without it. She is from the “upper-class” of the Snow Country’s Communist Government, and thus many of the students at the shinobi academy treat her differently than they do the others.

Nindo; "Way of the Ninja": “I won’t let things get in my way of being a strong kunoichi.

Clan/Bloodline: None




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Weapon Points Remaining: 2
Additional Weapon Points Gained: 0

Biography: The hall glowed with the golden radiance of hundreds of chandeliers and candles. Across the banquet tables were set dishes that would make anyone’s mouth water, and probably enough food was there to feed ten families of six for a week. The cutlery was set, the napkins folded, and the dishes spotless. The guests were all clad in the most beautiful dresses and suits available to man, and at the top of one table sat a large doll with a blank expression on its face, being squished and manipulated by a small child. It was like a scene one might find in a fairytale picture book, and this was all for one little girl, the first child of the extremely well off and government affiliated Shinsei family.

Yomi’s life was like that of a princess. She had beautiful dresses, servants for her every whim, a stunningly beautiful and large house. Anything and everything that she could ever want, she had in an instant. There was only one thing that Yomi couldn’t have, and that was her hearing. She was completely deaf, and unable to hear a single word. She did not know what the voice of her mother or father sounded like, she couldn’t hear the piano being played by one of the maids, and she could not hear the sounds of the birds as she woke up bathed in light through her large comfy bed.

Now don’t let Yomi’s lifestyle fool you, Yomi was an innocent girl. She is not spoiled, greedy, or unkind in any way. She just happens to have everything her heart could desire. This was mostly due to her parents. Because of Yomi’s disability, they became very protective of her. They would hardly even let her go outside for fear she might hurt herself, and if they did, she was accompanied by at least one guard and one servant at all times. Thus Yomi was sheltered, and knew very little of the hardships of the outside world, her best friend being a doll she received on her first birthday.

Yomi wanted to know though, she was curious about what the world was like. She only knew what she read in books, and what her tutors would teach her. Thus, she went to her parents one day and asked to go to the ninja academy.

This was a hard request for the girl’s parents to fulfill. Being a ninja was a dangerous job, certainly not one for their little girl. Who were they though to tell her no, their sweet, precious, angel of a little girl? Thus, they allowed her to go, but a guard was sent with her everyday to the academy to make sure she was alright. They figured her interest with it would pass soon enough, and they would not have to worry about it anymore.

Yomi’s time at the academy was a lonely one. Many of the other children stayed away from her, feeling envy of her obvious wealth simply from the clothes that she wore. To them, she was the reason that their life was filled with poverty, she represented to them and their parents, the government that kept the poor, poor, and the rich, rich. The few friends Yomi made had a very hard time doing anything with her because of the fact that to communicate they needed someone who was able to perform sign language.

Yomi’s parents hired a private tutor for her ninja training so that she could practice without getting hurt badly. He taught her a special sort of combat involving puppets that not many shinobi knew, and a type that interested the girl very much so. Yomi trained very hard, learning how to mold her chakra into the form of a string, and with it manipulate her doll which she had reconfigured into a weapon.

With this special training, Yomi was able to pass the final test for the ninja academy, and gain the forehead protector and symbol of the Snow Village. Her determination to become a strong Kunoichi has not lessened a day since she began her training, and continues to grow with every day.

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*Yomi is able to communicate using sign language, and can use her puppet to put words to the signs.
*Yomi has a basic lip-reading ability.
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:27 PM   #2
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Weapon Points Remaining: 4 (Because of Medical Archetype)
According to the archetype you get more weapon points when you take it as your primary. However it is your secondary and there fore you do not get anymore points for having the medical archetype.

EDIT: Added some points that should not have been added when I was complaining about something so I deleted that part.
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:41 PM   #3
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Fixed it up.
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Old 03-19-2006, 07:26 PM   #4
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Can't find where we posted it in the Mod Lounge (considering no one edited it into the rules) you either have atleast 1 in every stat or it cannot go through. So please edit accordingly. EDIT: You also have 8 AP. I cannot tell where they are on your stats and you used 2 ap on Jutsu atleast. Genin only get five and you have seven spent on Puppetry.
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Old 03-19-2006, 07:49 PM   #5
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Ok it's all fixed now, took out two jutsu so no AP were used on jutsu, and fixed my stats.

[EDIT] I also added a key so the math could be easier to understand.
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Old 03-19-2006, 08:37 PM   #6
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Nice to see you fixed it up =P
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Old 03-19-2006, 09:04 PM   #7
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Let's get this party started. approved.
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Old 03-20-2006, 06:19 PM   #8
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Old 03-20-2006, 06:25 PM   #9
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Strength: 1= (1 - 1 - 1 + [2] + (1))
Speed: 1= (1 - 1 - 1 + [2] + (1))
Stamina: 1= (1 - 1 - 1 + [2] + (1))
You subtracted 2 from stamina and called them archetype flaws, but one of those should be coming from willpower, not stamina.
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Tactics 5, Intelligence 4, Willpower 4

You are 1 Tactic point short of the requirement.
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